Post by Wolf on Jul 30, 2009 13:34:13 GMT -5
Name:BrambleStar
Clan:RiverClan
Rank:Leader
Age:29 moons
AppearanceBrambleStar is small for his age. He has a skinny look to him. He is a light brown tabby with deep rich gold eyes. He has a pale pink nose, white whiskers and long claws.
Personality: BrambleStar is kind. He loves to help other clans in need but often says no. He can be mean to other clan cats when needed but mostly his clan is out of the danger. He can be a happy-go-lucky kind of tom when all is well.
History:BrambleStar was the only kit in his litter. He grew up with all the attention on him because he was the only kit in RiverClan. When he turned 6 moons old be became an apprintice and had his dads best friend as a mentor. He finished his training early and recieved his warrior name as Bramblewhisker. After several moons went by he became deputy because the previous deputy drowned. When his leader died after his last life was taken Bramblewhisker became leader of RiverClan at only 24 moons old.
Nine Lives(Leaders only):
Courage-from Riverstar, creater of RiverClan
Justice-his mother
Loyalty-his old leader
Protection-his ex-mentor
Focus-his best friend
Love- old riverclan elder
Nobility-old Riverclan shecat
Confidance-the old deputy of RiverClan
Compassion-his father
Roleplay Sample(Nothing to do with BrambleStar)
CinderPaw's claws dug into the tree she clung to. Hissing at the dog that nearly couldn't reach her. The dog jumped up at her and she lashed at it with an unsheathed claws, scratching its nose and bringing blood. "Take that mutt." she hissed to the dog after it let out a yelp.
Suddenly, this great black and white shaped zoomed out of the brush and directly on top of the dog. It howled as the cat's claws peireced it's skin and turned, trying to snap at it. HawkShadow held on with all over his might, tearing at the dog until he was eventually thrown skyward and landed with a great thud.
MoonDare sped in right after his brother hit the ground and lept for the dog in rage. His long sharp claws dug into the dog's neck and it began to yelp. MoonDare began to bit down on the dogs ear drawing blood a lot of blood. The blood trickled into the dogs eyes enough where he couldn't see anything. Using his hind claws MoonDare stretched out his hind legs to give the dog more deep wounds, the dog dropped to the ground and began to pant. MoonDare let go of the dog's ear and reached around to the dog's throat and ripped it wide open. Killing this dog was like living in the past. MoonDare didn't sever the main vain in the throat it reminded him too much like his past. Sheathing his claws he jumped off the dog and ran to his fallen brother. He whipped around when the dog got up and began to run blindly threw NatureClan territory towards the twolegs. Only then did he sniff his brother to make sure he was alive before he dashed after the blind dog to make sure it left.
CinderPaw began to relax as she climbed down the tree which protected her. "HawkShadow???" she said nudging his body.
MoonDare's meow came from behind CinderPaw. ''The dog is gone." He walked towards his brother and put him on his back and waited.
"Thanks for doing that MoonDare." CinderPaw meowed to the tom. CinderPaw sniffed his broken leg. "We need to get you back to camp and fast to LeafPaw can fix it." she meowed worriedly.
MoonDare was silent as CinderPaw talked to HawkShadow.
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Codeword Twilight
Clan:RiverClan
Rank:Leader
Age:29 moons
AppearanceBrambleStar is small for his age. He has a skinny look to him. He is a light brown tabby with deep rich gold eyes. He has a pale pink nose, white whiskers and long claws.
Personality: BrambleStar is kind. He loves to help other clans in need but often says no. He can be mean to other clan cats when needed but mostly his clan is out of the danger. He can be a happy-go-lucky kind of tom when all is well.
History:BrambleStar was the only kit in his litter. He grew up with all the attention on him because he was the only kit in RiverClan. When he turned 6 moons old be became an apprintice and had his dads best friend as a mentor. He finished his training early and recieved his warrior name as Bramblewhisker. After several moons went by he became deputy because the previous deputy drowned. When his leader died after his last life was taken Bramblewhisker became leader of RiverClan at only 24 moons old.
Nine Lives(Leaders only):
Courage-from Riverstar, creater of RiverClan
Justice-his mother
Loyalty-his old leader
Protection-his ex-mentor
Focus-his best friend
Love- old riverclan elder
Nobility-old Riverclan shecat
Confidance-the old deputy of RiverClan
Compassion-his father
Roleplay Sample(Nothing to do with BrambleStar)
CinderPaw's claws dug into the tree she clung to. Hissing at the dog that nearly couldn't reach her. The dog jumped up at her and she lashed at it with an unsheathed claws, scratching its nose and bringing blood. "Take that mutt." she hissed to the dog after it let out a yelp.
Suddenly, this great black and white shaped zoomed out of the brush and directly on top of the dog. It howled as the cat's claws peireced it's skin and turned, trying to snap at it. HawkShadow held on with all over his might, tearing at the dog until he was eventually thrown skyward and landed with a great thud.
MoonDare sped in right after his brother hit the ground and lept for the dog in rage. His long sharp claws dug into the dog's neck and it began to yelp. MoonDare began to bit down on the dogs ear drawing blood a lot of blood. The blood trickled into the dogs eyes enough where he couldn't see anything. Using his hind claws MoonDare stretched out his hind legs to give the dog more deep wounds, the dog dropped to the ground and began to pant. MoonDare let go of the dog's ear and reached around to the dog's throat and ripped it wide open. Killing this dog was like living in the past. MoonDare didn't sever the main vain in the throat it reminded him too much like his past. Sheathing his claws he jumped off the dog and ran to his fallen brother. He whipped around when the dog got up and began to run blindly threw NatureClan territory towards the twolegs. Only then did he sniff his brother to make sure he was alive before he dashed after the blind dog to make sure it left.
CinderPaw began to relax as she climbed down the tree which protected her. "HawkShadow???" she said nudging his body.
MoonDare's meow came from behind CinderPaw. ''The dog is gone." He walked towards his brother and put him on his back and waited.
"Thanks for doing that MoonDare." CinderPaw meowed to the tom. CinderPaw sniffed his broken leg. "We need to get you back to camp and fast to LeafPaw can fix it." she meowed worriedly.
MoonDare was silent as CinderPaw talked to HawkShadow.
Picture
Codeword Twilight